I am splitting myself in two, and writing a short story in parallel to my work on the novel. I just find it beneficial to take a break from the novel every once in a while, and at the same time, not being lazy.
I want to post the story here in parts, and would love to get feedback, either via comment, or via email.
Honesty is most welcome, and constructive criticism will be highly appreciated.
If you’d rather tell me to “hang it up” or spice your review with some “colorful terms”, please send that directly to my email 😉
With that being said, on the right and to the bottom, you will find the first PDF.